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I'm not gonna' give a biased review now just 'cos I dun did work on it. The whole set up, I thought it was ok I suppose seeing as I agreed to it (LOL) but it kinda feels like a continuation of Screwits one... or like Pokemon Spread but focusing on her tits as opposed to her ass.

You need to change the audio, man in the publish settings in Flash. You still have the audio stream/audio event set to 16kps, you need to change that up to 160kps so the audio actually sounds like the files I sent you.

Your animation is better than before but still needs work. Like when Joy first shows up, the lineart is HELLA messy. I know you've started using a tablet (I take it you used it on this) but you need to SLOW DOWN WOAH. Like I said, its better than before, but the lines were so rushed looking. And theres some other things like how her boobs were clipping over her shirt when she revealed them in such an odd looking way, and when Ash or whoever pokiemans protagonist is nowadays is saying "my mom never told me", is that like... shading on the top of his head? The pure black? Because it looks like one of those jewish man hats rofl.

Yeah once again I have to keep going back to saying YOU ARE IMPROVING, but with the rushed lineart and all-too-familiar "Nurse Joy is hawt" themes both of the previous major pokemon parodies have had, some stars have to be knocked off. Oh yeah, and fix the audio. You can just go back into the .fla (granted you havent deleted it), change the audio in the publish settings and reupload it. Those are my two cents. I still heart you bro, i still heart you, you just need to work on shit. Oh and don't call people "chairs", super offensive man.

SpoonFullTits responds:

Thanks man!! i understand lol :)

Pretty fantabulous overall, but yeahah something about the tongues and mouth movements irk me, and the cake sequence went on for a teensy bit too long, but it was great. The whole sequence from when he wakes up to the end is hilarious!

Also no such thing as too many dicks

Cockadoodledee responds:

Well, glad you liked it! If anything, there is never enough dicks?! That didn't sound straight in the slightest..

It's well animated to a certain degree, but like Damien said, there does seem to be more than one similarity to some Oney and Pebbles cartoons. Like the whole typing sequence looks almost exactly like the kid typing at the start of Pebbles' Arrow To The Knee cartoon... then the "look left to right really fast while sweating profusely" looks like it came straight from the Hellbenders short. And then the kid who was eating the cookies looked and sounded just like the guy who put the tissue roll down his pants in "FYAT".

We've all made mistakes like this, I've certainly unintentionally made scenes that resemble scenes in other animators work before, but there's just too many instances in this cartoon for it to be unintentional. Still, like I said, the animation is pretty okay but I'm hoping for more original stuff next time.

It was pretty okay, but when drawing shadows with the brush tool in Flash, click the blue circle with the red line going through it in the toolbox and select "Paint Inside", it basically allows you to color inside the black lines.
The concept of the video is nice, otherwise.

ThePrawn responds:

Oh sweet. Thanks! That's useful.

I think the music might have been a bit too lively for what was going on, especially since not much action is going in the first few scenes, but it was cute and the animation was great and fluid. NICE SHTUFF

Brewster responds:

Haha I know what you mean. It's like, she's stealing a sandwich with this cutesy-ass music going on, kinda seems out of place. But whatever, I like the song regardless. Thanks a lot!

Really solid animation, and great background work. Also loved the uses of the Wilhelm Scream and the "MY LEG" SpongeBob audio clips haha

Only complaint is what you've already admitted to - the poor quality Fred voice. I mean its hard to know what Fred's saying in his own videos, but with the quality issue with this, it was pretty impossible to understand. And on the subject of voices, I don't who's John and who's Mark, but whichever is the smaller younger one, he should speak up too.

Still though, loved everything else

BoomBuster responds:

thanks for the comment, as i put my original acting voice into high pitched effects for fred (which i use WavePad with), i actually think that NO ONE can understand what he's saying. so that's why i putted the little cop and the robber in the beginning of fred scene so that hopefully you can understand

This is all kinds of amazing. What starts out as a hopeful, triumphant ballad becomes a heart-breaking harmony that is the equivalent of the most glorious of heaven's angels playing their golden harps

All these SME's are the same, they all end up with sex scenes with the sound going like "OIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOIOI OIOIOIOIOIOIOIO"
I usually think Microsoft Sam voiced flashes are pretty funny but these are all identical

I have a soft spot for Microsoft Sam voiced flashes

This kinda' junk isn't really for Newgrounds, put it on Youtube instead.
This didn't make much sense either and I couldn't understand a thing you were saying with the background music drowning out the dialogue.

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